After my in-class critique session, I gained lots of helpful feedback from both my teacher and classmates. In this blog, I’ll quickly go over what the feedbacks are and what changes I have made.

Feedback 1

The words (circled in red) should all be aligned to the left. Also, they need to stand out more for better visibility;

Therefore I made the words stand out better by changing them from white to neon green, and I also made them thicker too;

Feedback 2

The words (circled in red) need to be bigger and more visible. And also, the weather report (circled in green) is unnecessary or needs to be redesigned. Right now, it looks out of place and clunky.